The feedback we recieved was:
Holding a shot steady: 'mostly very good', but opening masks shots of us 3 need refilming as they're too jumpy.
Framing a shot: the shot of me and Maya walking in heels still isnt working, although we have slowed it down, so we are going to have to think of a new idea of how to show the contrast between mine and her feet. We are still thinking of the idea of using Paiges shoes as she has a lot bigger shoes than me so you'll be able to see it more clearly that the shoes are too big for Maya. Also 'some really nice framing of your external shots'.
Appropriate material: good use of mask, magazine covers and fashion items, all things that represent beauty.
Selecting mise en scene: same suggestion to put masks on a stick so you dont have to see peoples hands. In the shot of Maya sat down in a chair when shes reading she should be reading a fashion magazine to fit in with the theme of image and beauty. Good locations.
Editing for meaning: cut shot of Maya sat down reading before hand comes in the shot.Varied shot transitions, caption and other FX: some good ideas for green screen, but also thought of an idea where on the first shot of Gabby where she looks like shes on a magazine cover, we thought she could start off being a still image and then start moving after. Also the idea of speeded up people on the chorus is a good idea.
Use of sound with images/editing: we need to check Gabbys lip syncing in the outdoor location because it is slightly out.
Overall comment: 'definetly improving showing advanced skills in green screen'
After recieving this feedback, the main things we need to improve on is:
- improving mask shots
- improving Maya shots
- getting more images to do with fashion
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