Feedback from our 3rd cut of production

We had to show our third cut of our production today to recieve feedback from the class and our teacher on how we can make some final improvements:



After showing our 3rd cut of our production we recieved feedback from Mrs Allison and the rest of our class. Our feedback sheet above shows that our production is mainly in the proficient section but with some parts being excellent and still some in basic.

To improve our production further the things we need to do are:

1.  Although we have reshot the shoe scene several times, Mrs still doesnt think it is working. However, she said it is up to us if we want to leave it in or try something else because she personally doesnt like it.
2. At the end of the song, on the last line that Paige sings we cut her off to early before she says the last word of the sentence so we have to make her bit longer so she sings the whole line.
3. On the 2nd lot of masks we don't think the cross dissolve transition between the masks looks good and we want to change it so they are like the first lot of masks with us 3, with dip to black in between each person.